Vision: I love the angle of the picture and the design of the suit and the dragon. I've always loved sci-fi suits.I loved how the lights on th dragon travel down it's body realistically.
Originality: Personally I hate this part of the critique. I've seen plenty of fantasy dragon pics and sci-fi dragon pics, but this is both. havent seen that.
Tequnique: I wish I could draw like you. I love how smooth and detailed everything looks. The suit also almost seems like it belongs in that forest.
Impact: Your art's impact is like a chair to the face, ow.